Writing First Parcial

Story:

One day when I was eight years old I went on vacation to Oaxaca exactly Ocotlan because in that place live family by my Mom, but hey went on holiday with cousins ​​and uncles and spent a week there, my bad experience begins the second day we were there, I have a cousin with whom I pass it well, then that day I was playing with it I do not remember very well that but we were running around the house it was dark and in the yard is almost no light, then running inadvertently stumbled upon an edge on the floor and just in front of the gate was open and fell over the edge with this and well I cut my forehead and began to leave too much blood running time between the house and all were frightened luckily I have an aunt who study to become a doctor and she sewed my wound then I guess after that time spent was not very good because I could not do anything fun, at least for me it was an experience not very good because the blow hurt a lot even still I have the scar that

That would be my bad experience.